With the understanding that my previous slogans read like paragraphs, I went back to the drawing board to create a few more.
- Odd Beyond Belief
- Odd, No Doubt
- Peculiar but COOL
- One of a kinds X 10
- Look Ma, Two Heads
- Wow, Two Heads Are ...
- Oooh, Look At That!
- Look at Dat, Look at Dat
- SEE It To Believe It!
- Look But Don't Touch !
So, I am looking for feedback from this list, what do you like.
SO we have a slogan!!!
ReplyDeleteDESIGNER: Milton Glaser / Sheppard feiry
GRID: Compound Modular Column + collage
TARGET AUDIENCE: Locals – people who would not normally go to the freak show
CONCEPT: How weird the things are? More that the odd is the norm.
SLOGAN: Unimaginable, amazed, astounded, mind boggling, remarkable, astonished. Is this your neighbor
Be amazed
Remarkable
Beyond the ordinary
Natures rare oddities
Curiosities.
Rare
3/28 SLOGAN: Gotta see it to believe it
ODD no doubt
Freakishly fabulous
Side show banner – you have to create your own banner.
Use the designer as a spring board. Milton is poppy and 70’s – 80’s So you banner could have the same layout as the side show But the actualy illustration is more 60’s or 70’s like Milton Glasers style.
Design: Always great to see your handing in work – this is where the critique process starts. What is all the blobbiness? We have to go back to the principles of Design. What is your Hierarchy? The slogan should be the most important. This needs a lot of work .. Why all the typefaces, I thought you were going to have a banner. This is very cluttered any text that is outlined is out the movement through the piece is not expressed. Did not see the roughs, you seem to be able to punch out rough until you get it – that is one of your great traits. Bitsy pseudo photographic look – your greatness is that you have great illustrations from the photos. You have a great repository of techniques that can translate into advertising so give it a go even if it takes a great deal of time.
ReplyDeleteUPGRADE YOUR BLOG PLEASE